Narration issues

Personally, I noticed a lot of little issues, the narration is… weird sometimes

-Npcs seems to repeat themselves

-There’s way too much events. Like we say one sentence, or one action, and the response is way too long, something happen, then suddenly a character comes and change the dynamic, then suddenly another event in the same message, too much dialogues that we don't have time to respond, the npc asked too much different questions (separated by random events, in the same message), the message are too long…. Just over one sentence I said.

-I can't really tell but sometimes it's.. weird, Franz sometimes has memory problem, forget how a character is supposed to act (wrong personality), the OOC works but in the next messages, it’s like nothing happened in the narrative or in the world, OOC do not work also sometimes. The story, the cohesion, I struggle to keep a logical story in my adventure, something new happen all the time.

I noticed that npcs acts more on their own, but ther’s too much event at the same time.

I noticed that Franz seems to be more interactive with the player, guiding him on what he can do next.