Dialogues - actions timing

Fenix model.

The timing of dialogues and narrative actions in the structure of Franz’s text needs to be studied, it’s not realistic.

I'm asking an NPC to follow me , and Franz Describe first the follow, then the response “Okay, I follow you.” It should be the other way around : First the “Okay, I follow you” THEN the description of the npc following me. It’s always “Narrative actions, then answer with a dialogue” which is sometimes coherent, but most of times unrealistic.

I’m asking a NPC to come and check if my theories are right and Franz response is : The npc comes, then answer “Okay, I'm checking.” Which is false and unrealistic. The right timing is “Okay I'm checking" Then the npc can moves. Narration actions into dialogues = most of the time unrealistic.

Dialogues or answer to a reaction to a question or a talk then narrative actions of the description of this talk or reaction = the right thing to do, especially in a conversation.

Timing of dialogues and narrative actions needs to be studied.